Ch.8 Part 6 ์ง€๋ฌธ์™„์„ฑ ์ „๋žต

Part 6 ์ง€๋ฌธ์™„์„ฑ ์ „๋žต

Part 6์˜ 4๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋ฌธ์ œ ์œ ํ˜•์„ ๊ตฌ๋ณ„ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค์ ‘์†๋ถ€์‚ฌ ์„ ํƒ ์ „๋žต์„ ์ตํžŒ๋‹ค๋ฌธ์žฅ ์‚ฝ์ž… ๋ฌธ์ œ์˜ ํ’€์ด๋ฒ•์„ ํŒŒ์•…ํ•œ๋‹ค
article

ํ•ต์‹ฌ ๋‚ด์šฉ

Part 6 = Part 5 + ๋ฌธ๋งฅ ํŒ๋‹จ

Part 6 ์‹œํ—˜ ๊ตฌ์„ฑ 4๊ฐœ ์ง€๋ฌธ ร— 4๋ฌธ์ œ = 16๋ฌธ์ œ. ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ, ๊ณต์ง€, ํŽธ์ง€, ๊ธฐ์‚ฌ ๋“ฑ์˜ ๋นˆ์นธ ์ฑ„์šฐ๊ธฐ๋กœ, Part 5์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•ยท์–ดํœ˜ ๋ฌธ์ œ + ์ ‘์†๋ถ€์‚ฌ + ๋ฌธ์žฅ ์‚ฝ์ž…์ด ์ถœ์ œ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์–ดํœ˜ยท๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ๋ฌธ์ œ๋Š” Part 5์™€ ๋™์ผํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ’€๋ฉด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. Part 6๋งŒ์˜ ํŠน์ˆ˜ ์œ ํ˜•์ธ ์ ‘์†๋ถ€์‚ฌ์™€ ๋ฌธ์žฅ ์‚ฝ์ž…์„ ์ง‘์ค‘์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋‹ค๋ฃจ๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์•ž ๋ฌธ์žฅ๊ณผ ๋’ท ๋ฌธ์žฅ์˜ ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ ๊ด€๊ณ„๋ฅผ ํŒŒ์•…ํ•˜์„ธ์š”

์ ‘์†๋ถ€์‚ฌ ํ’€์ด๋ฒ• โ€” ์—ญ์ ‘ยท์ธ๊ณผ ๋นˆ์นธ ์•ž๋’ค ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์ฝ๊ณ  ๊ด€๊ณ„๋ฅผ ํŒ๋‹จํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์•ž๋’ค๊ฐ€ ๋ฐ˜๋Œ€ โ†’ However ์•ž์ด ์›์ธ, ๋’ค๊ฐ€ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ โ†’ Therefore

์ ‘์†๋ถ€์‚ฌ ํ’€์ด๋ฒ• โ€” ์ถ”๊ฐ€ยท์ „ํ™˜ ๊ฐ™์€ ๋ฐฉํ–ฅ ์ •๋ณด ์ถ”๊ฐ€ โ†’ Furthermore ์ฃผ์ œ ์ „ํ™˜ โ†’ Meanwhile

๋ฌธ์žฅ ์‚ฝ์ž… = Part 6 ์ตœ๊ณ ๋‚œ๋„

๋ฌธ์žฅ ์‚ฝ์ž… ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ž€? ๋นˆ์นธ์— ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐˆ ์™„์ „ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ(4๊ฐœ ๋ณด๊ธฐ)์„ ๊ณ ๋ฅด๋Š” ๋ฌธ์ œ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ ‘์†๋ถ€์‚ฌ์™€ ๋‹ฌ๋ฆฌ ๋ณด๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋ชจ๋‘ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด๋ฏ€๋กœ ์ฝ๋Š” ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ๋” ๊ฑธ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

ํ’€์ด ์ „๋žต โ‘  โ€” ์•ž๋’ค ๋ฌธ์žฅ ๋จผ์ € ์ฝ๊ธฐ ์•ž ๋ฌธ์žฅ์˜ ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ํ‚ค์›Œ๋“œ์™€ ๋’ท ๋ฌธ์žฅ์˜ ์ฒซ ํ‚ค์›Œ๋“œ๊ฐ€ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ ๋‹จ์„œ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

ํ’€์ด ์ „๋žต โ‘ก โ€” ๋Œ€๋ช…์‚ฌยท์ง€์‹œ์–ด ์ถ”์  ๋ณด๊ธฐ์— this, these, such, it ๋“ฑ์ด ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉด, ๋นˆ์นธ ์•ž ๋ฌธ์žฅ์— ๊ทธ ๋Œ€์ƒ์ด ์žˆ์–ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

ํ’€์ด ์ „๋žต โ‘ข โ€” ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ ํ๋ฆ„ ํ™•์ธ ์‚ฝ์ž… ํ›„ ์•žโ†’๋นˆ์นธโ†’๋’ค๊ฐ€ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ์ด์–ด์ง€๋Š”์ง€ ํ™•์ธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์‹œ๊ฐ„ ๊ด€๋ฆฌ: ๋ฌธ์žฅ ์‚ฝ์ž…์€ 1๋ฌธ์ œ์— 30~40์ดˆ๊ฐ€ ๊ฑธ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. 1์ง€๋ฌธ ์ „์ฒด๋ฅผ 2~3๋ถ„ ์•ˆ์— ๋๋‚ด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋ชฉํ‘œ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ์˜ค๋ž˜ ๊ณ ๋ฏผํ•˜๋ฉด ๋งˆํ‚น ํ›„ ๋„˜๊ธฐ์„ธ์š”.

Part 6 ์ „๋žต ์‹ค์ „ ์—ฐ์Šต

"The new policy has been well received. _____, some departments have reported concerns about implementation."์— ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐˆ ์ ‘์†๋ถ€์‚ฌ๋Š”?

๋ฌธ์žฅ ์‚ฝ์ž… ๋ฌธ์ œ์—์„œ ๋ณด๊ธฐ์— 'This initiative'๋กœ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด, ๋นˆ์นธ ์•ž ๋ฌธ์žฅ์— ๋ฐ˜๋“œ์‹œ ์žˆ์–ด์•ผ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€?

key

ํ•ต์‹ฌ ์šฉ์–ด

์–ดํœ˜ ๋ฌธ์ œ

๋ฌธ๋งฅ์— ๋งž๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด ์„ ํƒ (1~2๋ฌธ์ œ)

๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ๋ฌธ์ œ

์‹œ์ œยทํ’ˆ์‚ฌยท์ ‘์†์‚ฌ ๋“ฑ (1๋ฌธ์ œ)

์ ‘์†๋ถ€์‚ฌ

๋ฌธ์žฅ ๊ฐ„ ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ ๊ด€๊ณ„ (0~1๋ฌธ์ œ)

๋ฌธ์žฅ ์‚ฝ์ž…

๋นˆ์นธ์— ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐˆ ๋ฌธ์žฅ ์„ ํƒ (1๋ฌธ์ œ)

Therefore / Consequently

๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋ฏ€๋กœ (์ธ๊ณผ: ์•ž์ด ์›์ธ, ๋’ค๊ฐ€ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ)

However / Nevertheless

๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ (์—ญ์ ‘: ์•ž๊ณผ ๋ฐ˜๋Œ€ ๋‚ด์šฉ)

Furthermore / Additionally

๊ฒŒ๋‹ค๊ฐ€ (์ถ”๊ฐ€: ๊ฐ™์€ ๋ฐฉํ–ฅ ์ •๋ณด ์ถ”๊ฐ€)

Meanwhile / In the meantime

ํ•œํŽธ (์ „ํ™˜: ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์ฃผ์ œ๋กœ ์ด๋™)

For example / For instance

์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด (์˜ˆ์‹œ: ์•ž์˜ ๊ตฌ์ฒด์  ์‚ฌ๋ก€)

In other words

๋‹ค์‹œ ๋งํ•ด (ํ™˜์–ธ: ๊ฐ™์€ ๋‚ด์šฉ ์žฌ์„ค๋ช…)

check_circle

ํ•ต์‹ฌ ์ •๋ฆฌ

  • 1Part 6 = ์–ดํœ˜ + ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• + ์ ‘์†๋ถ€์‚ฌ + ๋ฌธ์žฅ ์‚ฝ์ž… (4์ง€๋ฌธ ร— 4๋ฌธ์ œ)
  • 2์ ‘์†๋ถ€์‚ฌ: ์•ž๋’ค ๊ด€๊ณ„๋กœ ํŒ๋‹จ (Therefore/However/Furthermore/Meanwhile)
  • 3๋ฌธ์žฅ ์‚ฝ์ž…: ์•ž๋’ค ๋ฌธ๋งฅ + ๋Œ€๋ช…์‚ฌ ์ถ”์  + ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ ํ๋ฆ„ ํ™•์ธ
  • 41์ง€๋ฌธ 2~3๋ถ„ ๋ชฉํ‘œ, ์ „์ฒด 10๋ถ„ ์ด๋‚ด๋กœ ์™„๋ฃŒ

ํ€ด์ฆˆ์™€ ์ธํ„ฐ๋ž™์…˜์œผ๋กœ ๋” ๊นŠ์ด ํ•™์Šตํ•˜์„ธ์š”

play_circle์ธํ„ฐ๋ž™ํ‹ฐ๋ธŒ ๋ ˆ์Šจ ์‹œ์ž‘